Sunday, July 13, 2014

BOTTLEFISH


He’s a fish

In the bottle


And a fish

Out of the bottle

He’s a fish

Among the bottles

A bottle

Can’t contain him

So can’t he

Contain self with one

Thirst-angel

Gulp gulp gulp

Throat craves

More more more

Want not of tongue

Life

Corked in the bottle

Death drowns him

In the bottle.


5 comments:

  1. Yet another great poem in a row. wonderfully done Krishna! beautifully compared!

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  2. Your post has been shared. I am happy to say that your post is the first post which i shared on twitter and my first tweet.

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  3. thank you very much Vinoth. you've been a cute reader of mine.

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